I agree actually haha. In an effort to make my music less boring (or as I like to say, more dynamic) I often add solos that dont sound great. I'll try to work on that with my future songs though. Thanks for the advice!

haha yup this song was a turning point in my music making... See for months I couldn't come up with anything because nothing was good enough. I talked to my mom about it and she told me to just start something and not stop no matter what. So I did. I came up with a bassline, added some drums, made a synth line, worked from there. I thought it was pretty good, or "Muy Bien". So I took the phrase muy bien and reversed it, Neibuym, then changed the spelling so that it'd be more pronouncable. Theres a deep meaning behind all my song titles :)

thanks for the review! Your advice is always helpful.

Hm... I never realized that it sounded generic. But now that you mention it I can sorta tell. You see, that's a problem of mine. After only a few hours of working on a song, I stop hearing it. It's difficult to explain, but thats what happens. I cant tell if it's good, bad, boring, generic, whatever. When I first start writing a song, I take mental note of whether I like it or not. I promise myself that I'll keep working on it no matter what, even if I hate it down the road.

But thank you for the advice, I'll keep that in mind next time!